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I was so little
Contributed by
Jessi95
on
Saturday, 12th June 2010 @ 11:59:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I can hear the yelling I can hear the hits I can tell you're angry But this isnt as bad as it usually gets
Im only little Why cant you guys just stop This is all I yelled When I heard someone drop
Everything went quiet And I heard the door slam shut There was something wrong But I just didnt know what
I was so little Yet you left me so wrong You left her laying on the ground You were just too strong
You hit her till she fell You smacked her till she broke As if we were nothing to you But just a big joke
Im not sure whether to be happy Or if I should sit and cry All I knew was this was the last time I was going to have to tell you goodbye
So I sat and smiled And thought about the past I thought about the happy times And wondered why they didnt last
I remember when you used to smile And hold me so very tight But then suddenly You and mommy started to fight
The fighting got bad And youd hit her so hard I would sit in my room Praying for a guard
Mom was finally done She just wanted to let go So she fell to the ground Then you walked out into the cold snow
As I cried in my room Rocking on my knees I wanted to lock you outside And throw away the keys
But it's over now, I can stop crying Mommy get up Why arent you even trying?
You just lay there Not a movement in sight As I wait for you to wake And it soon becomes night
You are still sleeping What am I to do You look so peaceful And your lips are turning blue
Can you hear me As I scream out your name Does anyone hear me Or has the end come to the game?
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Re: I was so little
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 13th June 2010 @ 12:51:36 AM AEST (User
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I don't know what to say really. the sadness of this is absolute, you express it in such a way as to make the reader believe they are there watching it all. well writen, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: I was so little
(User Rating: 1 ) by iodinelove on
Sunday, 13th June 2010 @ 11:28:03 PM AEST (User
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Great job, Thanks for the read.
Always, abraham
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Re: I was so little
(User Rating: 1 ) by joe-joe on
Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 08:57:30 AM AEST (User
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this took me way back to my own childhood, remembering my mother laying out on the floor stabbed and broken, but she survived,
thank you for sharing.... |
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