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Love's Snare
Contributed by
unknownlegend
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Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 06:24:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Where is now, we wore so proud, the badge of strength and youth
those carefree rhymes have turned to lies ...who knows what's wrong or truth
Some times it's hard to go your way..... forget what never was
you say one day your mind will heal ..... but, you know it never does
Can either say with honest truth, who was right or wrong
fingers pointed, blame be placed but, that can't last for long
For years do pass, time's forgot and future plans mislaid
thru shorter days and longer nights the memories they do fade,
It matters not the days you live or nights you do survive
the dark and light they soon unite, at times they will entwine
So bind your wounded heart ..... and shore those nerves of steel
for what you thought were little hurts ...... you find can never heal
all will once come victim to, then all, we can relate
life soon becomes a tangled web, love's snare to ne'er escape
unknownlegend, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.
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Re: Love's Snare
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by chrisdavid on
Tuesday, 15th June 2010 @ 02:18:08 AM AEST
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| This is a good piece. I enjoyed it. |
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Re: Love's Snare
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 08:59:03 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. The couplets are a nice style used here.
Heidi |
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Re: Love's Snare
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd May 2014 @ 10:27:04 AM AEST
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so beautifully penned my friend, perfect rhyme
and flow too:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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