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Understanding
Contributed by
mistersarang
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Monday, 14th June 2010 @ 06:40:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You find yourself in the end of th world.
Empty handed, dumbfound and hurt.
You ask where do I go but no one listens
You scream WHY?
Tired of walking with the darkness. Side by Side.
Waiting for an opening. Where is it?
What is the meaning of success?
Why do I feel like I'm drowning when i hear that word.
Your heart pounding with no signs of stopping.
Feeling out of breathe, grasping for more but I'm weavy.
It's the climax, you ask yourself whats the next move?
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Re: Understanding
(User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on
Tuesday, 15th June 2010 @ 01:44:04 AM AEST
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| An interesting write, this one. |
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Re: Understanding
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 16th June 2010 @ 08:53:39 PM AEST
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This poem captures exactly how I have been feeling lately! Excellent poem!
Heidi |
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