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Latency
Contributed by
Smigit
on
Thursday, 17th June 2010 @ 06:06:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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With a penny per person,
pins prick my eyes.
Sights muddle to brown and level
lanes of blue fields and red nicked nails.
The putty of a friend
lay within self satisfaction.
Yet who can be happy
with you?
Spheres within us
rest with you.
So try not to worry
as much.
Just smile
Sometimes-
Open your view.
I'll be here
to talk.
Copyright ©
Smigit
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2010-06-17 18:06:43]
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Re: Latency
(User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on
Thursday, 17th June 2010 @ 06:49:47 PM AEST
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I like this a lot.
Don't know why, but i do.
always, abraham |
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Re: Latency
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 18th June 2010 @ 02:45:29 AM AEST
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| I like the way this flows over my mind, once again a really good piece of writing. |
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