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Misfortune
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Thursday, 17th June 2010 @ 06:40:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Fields of heaven
Capitalize
On an otherwise quiet day
The mobility
Of stone
Dreams
Tumbling violently
Down the incline
Of a once formidable
Forest
Set ablaze
A Millennium ago
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2010-06-17 18:40:47]
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Re: Misfortune
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by Smigit on
Thursday, 17th June 2010 @ 07:00:22 PM AEST
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| Dreary and dreamy, an oddly nice combination. |
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Re: Misfortune
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 17th June 2010 @ 07:27:41 PM AEST
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Ahhhhhhhh Abraham, that was swell!
I love it when you play with dreams that dwell.....especially those a Millennium ago!
Different, thought provoking too!
Good Work
Warm love
consue |
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Re: Misfortune
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 18th June 2010 @ 02:42:18 AM AEST
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Abraham
that was simply devine! as always your way with words fuels the imagination. well done. |
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Re: Misfortune
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by reubenrich on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 06:22:02 AM AEST
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Dreams
Tumbling violently
Down the incline
Of a once formidable
Forest
thats amazing, i love that section, wish i had wrote it myself. very good work. |
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Re: Misfortune
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by Butterflyperfect on
Wednesday, 24th November 2010 @ 01:12:49 PM AEST
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| Powerful and with such ease. kudos. |
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