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I hate this world you left me in
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Friday, 18th June 2010 @ 01:58:53 PM in AEST
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I go for days sometimes
without you on my mind
but once your thought reappears
you put me in a bind
I still feel so much love
but I feel so much more hate
I don't know where to turn
or how much more I can take
I hate what you have done to me
I hate who I've become
I hate to feel so alone
I hate to feel so dumb
I hate that I believed in you
that I trusted you so much
I hate the way I still long
just to feel your touch
I hate the way I miss you
I hate it when I cry
I hate this world you left me in
things seem so awry
I hate to see the sun come up
and watch it set again
can never sleep, only weep
just remembering your sins
I hate this pain you left me with
burning deep inside
I hate the memories I have
and that I never got good-bye
I hate so much of my life
and what you forced me through
but what I hate the most
is still being in love with you
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Re: I hate this world you left me in
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by brialuv on
Friday, 18th June 2010 @ 02:02:49 PM AEST
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| omg! i loved it beautiful |
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Re: I hate this world you left me in
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by emystar on
Friday, 18th June 2010 @ 02:04:28 PM AEST
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catchy write. Nice job.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: I hate this world you left me in
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by Avataar on
Tuesday, 31st August 2010 @ 08:37:07 AM AEST
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| Nice write. Sad to see your pain. The next time you get those thoughts, ask yourself who you would be without those thoughts. If you think you would be happier, and you want to be happier, those thoughts will leave you alone. God Bless. May happiness fill your life. |
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Re: I hate this world you left me in
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 12:44:03 AM AEST
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Very good flow! And yet another one I can relate to.
Thanks for sharing your feelings,
Tim |
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