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Take It all back
Contributed by
Jessi95
on
Saturday, 19th June 2010 @ 12:48:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I look you in the yes
And I see the tears run down
How could I let myself?
Look like a clown
In your eyes
I was everything
Until one day
I cut the string
I came home
With another guy
I was drunk off my ass
And I was completely high
Im not perfect
I tried to tell you
But you wouldnt listen
So now we are through
I miss the love
That we obviously shared
I miss the way
You obviously cared
I blew it all
And there is no going back
All I really wish
Is that I could re-trace my tracks
I would find a way
To tell you how I feel
I would take it all back
So your heart wouldnt have to deal
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Re: Take It all back
(User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 19th June 2010 @ 02:39:25 AM AEST
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| nice write, good rhyming, all in all a really good effort, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Take It all back
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by thebadguy9999 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 03:58:07 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: Take It all back
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 11:58:12 AM AEST
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It seems you are retracing my own steps, as I have made the same mistakes and lost a love that was real. Keep your head up and keep writing.
-Kara |
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