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Too Late Now
Contributed by
the_unknown
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Sunday, 20th June 2010 @ 12:59:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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You're late, my friend
I waited day by day
As you struggled through what to do about school
About girls
About life and family
I did my best
To make you happy
My victory came up empty handed
You were no more happy than the lies screaming from your eyes
It was wrong of me to expect some sort of gratification
Some sort of hint
You were sending mixed signals down the line, boy
Some days you obviously liked others, some days you acted as though you wanted all my attention
I decided for myself I'm through waiting to figure this out
You knew it all along, but I never did.
You'll always be one of my best friends
But kid, don't even think about us ever being together
I've forced myself forward, please do the same for me
Copyright ©
the_unknown
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2010-06-20 00:59:18]
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Re: Too Late Now
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by brialuv on
Sunday, 20th June 2010 @ 07:06:55 AM AEST
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| yesss! i can def relate this is a true strong write |
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Re: Too Late Now
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 20th June 2010 @ 08:13:48 AM AEST
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A very positive write... I love it!!!
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Re: Too Late Now
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by Angel-1 on
Tuesday, 13th July 2010 @ 05:18:31 AM AEST
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| i can kind of relate to this poem but alas i cannot be as strong as the end of this poem. |
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Re: Too Late Now
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 9th August 2010 @ 09:55:48 PM AEST
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I feel the emotional Torture in this flow
Excellent |
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