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Cutting it of
Contributed by
zeberdee
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Sunday, 20th June 2010 @ 12:34:24 PM in AEST
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Shadowy figures nearing you
entering proximity to
a thing that must be hidden
biting fears with every word
your thoughts are forbidden
and formulating them will only hurt
confining you to silence
and a lot of awkard pauses
you dont talk hench:
people doubt your causes
so all the lies
and all the love
you cut it of
till everything dies
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Re: Cutting it of
(User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on
Monday, 21st June 2010 @ 04:05:48 AM AEST
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| you sum up these feeling in a few simple words, your expression of these feelings is spot on, well writen. |
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Re: Cutting it of
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th March 2011 @ 01:03:17 AM AEST
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Okay, yeah, like this would be a good example. Your topic and message make me grimic some but then is not as powerful when distracted with typos and misspellings.
IE Dont vs don't & especially you cut it of instead of "off"?
Hope this is what you're asking for.
Take care & thanks,
Tim
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