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This House is Angry
Contributed by
urizen
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Monday, 21st June 2010 @ 03:20:43 PM in AEST
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This house is angry you can tell by the way
It's boards on the floors creak,
The doors all slam in unison
and the taps in the bathroom leak
It's timbers moan and the book shelves groan
with the weight of a thousand tomes
and the walls seem to say with peeling paint
"We want to be left alone"
The weeds grow thick by the door
And they scream
"Don't let the strangers in"
The pipes just shake
like a rattle snake
and the noise is a thunderous din
This house is angry,
I know it is
it tells me in every room and on every floor
"I hated you then, I hate you now and I hate you forever more"
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Re: This House is Angry
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by fish on
Monday, 21st June 2010 @ 07:40:37 PM AEST
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a well compressed emotions and imagery. this is a cute piece you have here.
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Re: This House is Angry
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by longhaircg on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2010 @ 07:15:27 AM AEST
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Very powerful write brought through imaginary props. nicely written, anger.
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Re: This House is Angry
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Sunday, 5th September 2010 @ 05:10:24 AM AEST
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