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More than Gold
Contributed by
Roned
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 02:47:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Friends are like clothes
Without them you are naked
Some are 'see me through'
And others miniskirts
Are you a DECENT garment?
Is your WARMTH exceedingly great?
Truly a true friend is a TREASURE
Copper is caring and discreet
Silver is affable and protective
Diamond is enduring and persistent
But gold SURPASSES them all
Is your WORTH more than GOLD?
-Gideon Mutai-
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Re: More than Gold
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2010 @ 06:12:18 AM AEST
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| Great first lines,then alot to think about well written |
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