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All Over the Place
Contributed by
vr2776
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Thursday, 24th June 2010 @ 11:16:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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New Beginnings, Life Changing,
Friends making, Doors Closing
Situations unclear, Questions brewing
Kids Growing, Mind renewing
Money Low, Bills to be paid
Tasks undone, Hours Fade
Job uncertain, frustrations come
No one to blame, No not one
Lessons learned, Lessons taught
Though it leaves me quite distraught
Desires inside, time must wait
Question now, what is fate?
Racing heart, raging storm
Not because anythings wrong
Just the wheels that are turning
From the questions that are burning
Excited, Expecting something new
No Not Certain what to do
Its time again, and I must wait
Though to wait is what I hate
In the end, it will subside
And the questions will decide
Decide the answers I want to know
Though Confused, Does it show
Mad Hatter, is that me
Questions, answers, to what will be
Goodbye, Goodnight until next time
I put my thoughts into Rhyme
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Re: All Over the Place
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 24th June 2010 @ 02:49:10 PM AEST
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