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Pastoral Poem
Contributed by
yourselforsomeonelikeyou
on
Monday, 28th June 2010 @ 12:35:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If I were telling you the truth, would you call me a liar? And if we were on good terms would you call me siar? It's cold as ice out here and your hotter than fire, So lets get down to business in my radio flyer.
Would you be mad if I asked you 21 questions? I'll take you out for taco tuesday, it's a hell of a blessin' I'm so good at this, lets skip the first impression Do you wanna go to school? Cause I can teach you a lesson.
Can i take you on a date, for St. Patricks Day? Would you pretend to be Irish, to satisfy my ways? Lets get out of this place, lets go far away My garage sounds ideal, What do you say?
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Re: Pastoral Poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by eshine on
Monday, 28th June 2010 @ 07:54:10 PM AEST (User
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great poem
I really enjoyed it...I feel a little hip hop-ish rhyme to it...:) |
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