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Live Life
Contributed by
shortgurl2006
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Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
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I live my life day by day
I try to think of things to say
I dont' know what to think anymore
I say goodbye as I walk out the door
Will this be the last time I see
See the world at how hard it can be
I have went through all the pain and strife
from the first day of my life
With all the fights that I've had
I never thought my life would seem so bad
From all the times I've tried to cope
Each time I come closer to loosing hope
One day I know, my life will be great
That'll be the day I change my fate.
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2003-04-16 05:35:00]
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Re: Live Life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 10:07:53 AM AEST
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| Such a tragic poem, but remember, life is what you make it and each day is a new beginning. |
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Re: Live Life
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 10:41:35 AM AEST
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| life brings many challanges, yet without the sad and hard times, how would we see or recognize the beautiful? hugs n' much love n' happiness to you, nessa |
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Re: Live Life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 04:14:16 PM AEST
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| well written...i feel the same way as you...it wuz amazing to read a poem in which i could see a reflection of how i feel. *Jo |
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Re: Live Life
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 04:23:48 PM AEST
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Can't wait till that day! I hope it's everything you want it to be! Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: Live Life
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 01:53:06 PM AEST
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| I am the writer of the poem and I thank you for all of your comments, they are very helpfull. I would like to let you know, that most of my poems that I write, I write from the feelings that I am feeling... I write when I am angry and I always feel better after I write a poem or two. |
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Re: Live Life
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by Percursors on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 10:44:16 PM AEST
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| omg! JJ this is really good...nice write... |
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