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The ''P'' Poem
Contributed by
BigDre
on
Wednesday, 30th June 2010 @ 10:57:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Patience permeates perseverance,
perseverance perfects.
Perfection procures prerogative,
Prerogative places.
Places proliferate problems,
Problems present pain.
Pain prevents peace,
Peace provides placidity.
Placidity promotes positive production,
Production produces passion.
Passion pursues pleasure,
Pleasure promotes preparation.
Preparation positions precisely,
Precise placement pens P poem.
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Re: The ''P'' Poem
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by The_Unknown on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 03:11:05 PM AEST
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| well. that definitely uses only words that start with P. haha. It was alright, it gets a tiny bit confusing. Probably because it's so long using only P's and I didn't know the definition of every word. But it's clever! Most people don't really attempt to create poems like this:) |
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Re: The ''P'' Poem
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 07:58:28 PM AEST
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Very cleverly done. Never read a poem like this - quite a challenge.
More challenging even than shadow poetry.
Can bite your teeth out on it.
Congratulations!
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Re: The ''P'' Poem
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 08:49:13 PM AEST
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Very creative. Most people cannot produce alliteration on this level. Very insightful.
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