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Mud Memories
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 09:48:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Monotonous moments mock meaning
until
a walk in the park
becomes
so much more.
Unavoidable miles of mud
welcome us.
My husband groans and swears(under his breath)
as his foot is cemented in the mud like concrete.
My daughter's foot is also stuck and
fear overcomes her.
I get her foot loose and then then begin laughing.
At first my husband, son, and daughter are upset and then
laughter echoes in between the forest's trees.
The moments in the mud of made lasting
impressions.
No soap will wash away these memories!
,
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2010-07-02 21:48:55]
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Re: Mud Memories
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 10:33:57 PM AEST
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Heartfelt,very sincere and most pleasurable to read.
The imagery created with your words is excellent and I felt as though I was right there.
Well Done!
Blessings
LW |
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Re: Mud Memories
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by The_Unknown on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 12:33:13 AM AEST
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Oh it's cute:D
It's the little moments like those that are the best! |
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Re: Mud Memories
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by Debris on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 05:36:46 AM AEST
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| I love the reality of this poem- it's real life as it happens. Thanks for posting. |
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Re: Mud Memories
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 08:08:03 AM AEST
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| good write. keep doin it |
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Re: Mud Memories
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by Breezy on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 07:13:23 PM AEST
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So nice when something so simple can turn our
mood around and actually make us laugh out loud. :)
This was delightful and touching. Thank you for
sharing this. I love poems that can draw a smile.
Lovely post. -- Achelois |
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Re: Mud Memories
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by courtseb on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 01:57:39 PM AEST
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| lol I can so relate to this poem, be there done that! Very cute! |
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