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In The Red
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
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Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 10:31:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Impassable emotions,feelings surge and choke
History,my bank account
Trust spent and broke
Attainable composure,I have cooled the heart
Found the will within myself
To hush the softest part
Restrainable Conjecture,thoughts will hold no plan
Take it as it comes to me
Hope you will understand
Copyright ©
lovingwhispers
... [
2010-07-02 22:31:16]
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Re: In The Red
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by emystar on
Friday, 2nd July 2010 @ 10:57:03 PM AEST
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Good work.
Hope everthing comes out in a good way.
lu, huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: In The Red
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by The_Unknown on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 10:25:08 AM AEST
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| i agree with emy |
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Re: In The Red
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by Breezy on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 06:49:54 PM AEST
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oh, this stabs the heart with a unique kind of sting.
From an emotional standpoint, this is devastating.
From a poetic one, it's overwhelming. Somehow
a tragic air envelopes the page while reading this.
Well done. Excellent post! -- Achelois
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Re: In The Red
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by andrewjones12 on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 08:03:48 AM AEST
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| lovely, again nice work. |
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