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Waking Up
Contributed by
Xnoybis
on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 10:13:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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This repetition
that I fall into
With a promise
to save myself
I sleep and fail
I wake and bail
I abandon
I embrace
You again
This repetition
that I fall into
With a promise
to save myself
I wake and fail
I sleep and bail
I abandon
I embrace
You again
I fail with abandon
I wake with fractals
I sleep to wake up
to failing again
Fractals
I wake up to
waking up
Again
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Re: Waking Up
(User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 04:48:16 PM AEST
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Yep I can say distinctly I know your feeling here.
Yes, Yes, Yes. How to shake it. Not so sure we want to! |
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Re: Waking Up
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by thebadguy9999 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 03:53:56 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: Waking Up
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by shereal_14 on
Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 07:11:33 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this poem |
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Re: Waking Up
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 06:58:45 PM AEST
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God work.
blessings,
emy |
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