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The Abyss
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 05:00:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When I saw you that fateful night
My eyes undressed you in delight
A vision for which I pray
Still ten long years to this day
One step closer to my dream
You are the one it does seem
In my heart and in my mind
For you I take my daily grind
With your smile cast my way
Makes me smile the whole day
I have three words I need to say
Until then my life is grey
I love you! I want you in my life
Marry me and be my wife
Step with me into the abyss
Share with me a loving kiss
Monday, 15 September 2008
11:58:33 PM
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Re: The Abyss
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Saturday, 3rd July 2010 @ 07:27:12 PM AEST
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Beautiful, sweet write.
good work.
blessings,
emy |
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