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7:20 am
Contributed by
elle
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Monday, 5th July 2010 @ 07:14:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I had a thought of you, today
a tiny, lovely thing
a pleasure
briefer than salvation
more remedial than rest
beyond the gloom
of endings. . .
of edges with sharp names
& in my mind
you thought of me
& all our in betweens
with lips, smile-parted
hoped filled. . . light hearted
with eyes that held no pain
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2010-07-05 07:14:16]
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Re: 7:20 am
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th July 2010 @ 01:23:48 PM AEST
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Beautifully stated, my dear Elle. Some people, I suppose, cannot remember why they fell in love with that "lost love" in the first place but I choose to try and remember that...remember the good.
And the title! I love the way you pinpoint this remembrance with a time reference.
As usual, your excellence shines.
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Re: 7:20 am
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 11:21:31 AM AEST
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| you really are a fine writer, well expressed and well writen. |
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Re: 7:20 am
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by JackDylan on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 06:28:09 AM AEST
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This is phenomenal, took me away.
Thanks for sharing it. :) |
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Re: 7:20 am
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by Spike on
Sunday, 11th July 2010 @ 02:26:07 AM AEST
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a very healing poem, elle - gave me a little hitch in my throat, this one, as my thoughts have been in the same place, by and by.
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