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- Freedom -
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143
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Monday, 5th July 2010 @ 10:47:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Patriotic
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Explosions in the air
Firecrackers everywhere
A boom goes here
And a boom goes there
I see little kids running
Dancing with sparklers
You should see their faces
As the finale waits
But whats to remember
Is how we got here
When all the soldiers went down
And through the towns
It killed everybody around
I love you freedom
And thank for trading
Your feet in my place
Its because of you
Were united and true
My flag colors are
Red white and blue
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Re: - Freedom -
(User Rating: 1 )
by thebadguy9999 on
Monday, 5th July 2010 @ 04:57:54 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: - Freedom -
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by JosephUnruh on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 10:38:04 PM AEST
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| good poem |
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Re: - Freedom -
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 08:44:29 AM AEST
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Yes thank God and our Military for our freedom.
Really good writing.
blessings, freedom,
emy
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