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Moonlight Ballet
Contributed by
lnnie
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Monday, 5th July 2010 @ 06:55:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Summer comes but once a year
for many and most
But yours is eternal.
A little bit of it traverses the tiny distance between us
and makes me bloom more than I should.
You have given me a thousand thousand starry summer nights;
You like dancing in the moonlight;
each ballet step you raise high
as all stands still in the moonbeam night;
your form revolving swirls and pirouettes.
My backyard glows with stardust;
the air fills with fireflies;
I sit mesmerized
staring into the wonderland
you create
those eternal summer days
those eternal moonlight nights.
You fly across the sleeping roses
and my heart stops.
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Re: Moonlight Ballet
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 07:55:17 AM AEST
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lovely piece of writing, very well expressed.
thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Moonlight Ballet
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by thebadguy9999 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 03:52:40 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: Moonlight Ballet
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 04:09:21 PM AEST
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| i digg the imagery in this piece, it created a truly delightful read. Thanks for sharing:) |
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