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The Madman II
Contributed by
omarzz
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Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 02:43:26 PM in AEST
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Farewell cruel world and I'll tell you why
A blank to chaos
Born to die
Tried to live without dead time
No mother or friend , foe, kiss or a dime
No reason or order
A broken mental border
Tried to see the wrong in right
Gazed upon the stars with fright
When all just stood by
I walked in , waved goodbye
And I tell you what it is all about
Once in , there is no getting out
I saw it in the skies
You feel it in me eyes
So no more darkness, no more pain
All to fear , nothing was to gain
And I'd kill you all if i have the time
Top it off with a nice little crime
Maybe then you'll start to think
The nothingness you have become
The misery you strive to bring
How you should've thought
What you should've done
How I should've played
What I had for fun
Burning soldiers, dying planes
War for good old days
Now who is to blame
I hereby end this pointless game
Copyright ©
omarzz
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2010-07-07 14:43:26]
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Re: The Madman II
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by thebadguy9999 on
Thursday, 8th July 2010 @ 06:58:50 AM AEST
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| nice write but chill dude.Jesus loves you |
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Re: The Madman II
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by quadira on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 10:24:27 AM AEST
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| A great write. Raw emotions. Portrays someone on the edge. Hope this is not poersonal experience. |
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