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Don't
Contributed by
daydreamer
on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 04:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Dont touch me so gently
For my body will quiver for your touch ever so intensely
Dont whisper sweet words of love in my ear
For my mind will start to believe we could be as you want us to be here
Dont kiss me with such passion
For my lips will tingle with satisfaction
Dont watch me walk by
For my eyes always have away of looking for you and they cant see you looking back at them or they will have that love stricken sigh
Dont send me roses or gifts
For it makes me think you might really care and youll be there through our drifts
Dont come back to me if you are just going to leave again
For my heart cant stand the pain of you taking it with you like youve been
You know far too much about me anyways
You know my dreams and my fears of my days
That is why you hurt me like you do
Just please turn around before you get to much closer and well be okay
I am off again ready to flood the universe with my tears of what we used to have
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2003-04-16 16:25:00]
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Re: Don't
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 04:32:11 PM AEST
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Wow... this really got to me... I don't know what else to say... excellent write. Blessed be,
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Re: Don't
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 05:44:46 PM AEST
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Emtional write, great job.
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Re: Don't
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by Sexygirl on
Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 06:08:19 PM AEST
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| That is so very true...you have captured the real picture here....well done.... |
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Re: Don't
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 04:44:17 PM AEST
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WOW!! Excellent!! Great emotions shown...
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