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The hole in my soul

Contributed by quadira on Saturday, 10th July 2010 @ 04:00:48 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



The hole in my soul

There is something missing
Like a missing jigsaw piece
I need to fill this emptiness
So this feeling inside will cease

Its is me I Am here

Its got to be popularity
I need more friends to shine
I need to be important
Then my soul will cease to pine

My daughter, listen to me

Ok so friends I now have got
Thats not what it could be
As this feeling deep inside
Still eats away at me

Waiting

Hmm alcohol makes me feel good
And warm and strong inside
But the feeling the next morning
I simply cant seem to abide

Tears

These drugs I am now taking
They attempt to fill this hole
But the longing is still there
Deep within my soul

I have tried all I can think of
And now I am stripped bear
Who will be my Saviour
Who will dare to care

My love is eternal
Open your ears and hear
For what I Am about to say
Will be very clear

My beautiful creation
Your heart only beats for me
So come to me my daughter
And I will set your free
Thank you Lord







Copyright © quadira ... [ 2010-07-10 16:00:48]
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Re: The hole in my soul (User Rating: 1 )
by joe-joe on Saturday, 10th July 2010 @ 05:29:36 PM AEST
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great write, and I can testify to the truth of it all...


Re: The hole in my soul (User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on Monday, 12th July 2010 @ 12:24:11 AM AEST
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Well written. Enjoyable read.


Re: The hole in my soul (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 02:15:44 PM AEST
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There is something missing
oh yes
I feel you on this flow
well done......




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