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All you do..
Contributed by
lovesucks
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Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All you do....
You yell, you scream
All you do is torture me
You argue, you fight
Is there an end in sight?
Give me a reason
You do NO pleasin'
So give me a reason
Am I stayin' or leavin'?
You probably don't care , the pain you've caused
My heart skipped a beat my whole life put on pause
We've walken the beaten track
Not looking forward, and never looking back
So where does the road lead now
To my lonely place alone in this living hell
No laughter in sight
I've given up the fight
Happiness far from gone
I'll be alone for way too long
Is life worth living?
Is love worth giving?
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2003-04-16 19:05:00]
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Re: All you do..
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 01:25:30 AM AEST
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powerful expression.I'm sorry things aren't going well for you.Hope you find the love you deserve.
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Re: All you do..
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 08:28:22 AM AEST
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Some torment well capturedt!...... that brings you to the questions in your last two lines.
I've been there once or twice but just carried on.....
It got better.
50th anniversary next year.
Beats being alone
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Re: All you do..
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by lovesucks on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 01:41:20 PM AEST
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I know I probably sound like I am all alone, in actuality I have two wonderful children. This is my second time through this and I am basically over it but it's these experiences that inspire me to write....Check out Love Sucks you should like that one....
Thank you so much for your input and I am glad you enjoyed it.
Congrats on your 50th Anniversary
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Re: All you do..
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by Trisha on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 11:59:49 PM AEST
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| i like this and long |
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