|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
No Chance
Contributed by
myworld
on
Tuesday, 13th July 2010 @ 03:52:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
Don't look back.
For there it is, stealthily stalking
Waiting in the offing
Keeping up steadfast,
The shadow of your Past.
Run away, run away.
As far as your wasted limbs can carry
Or as much as you want to hurry
There is just no escape
That is, if you believe, in Fate
Close your eyes.
Think of somewhere distant,
sometime other than the Present
That place to be, your vision blurred
That, is your notion of Future
The clock is ticking.
Time is malevolent.
myworld, PLEASE: To help keep this site INTERACTIVE, please read and comment on at least 3 poems for each one you submit.
Number of poems per author per 24 hours are limited depending on membership level and interactivity.
Copyright ©
myworld
... [
2010-07-13 03:52:53]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: No Chance
(User Rating: 1 )
by evah2121 on
Tuesday, 13th July 2010 @ 04:33:51 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| AMAZING poem! :) |
|
|
Re: No Chance
(User Rating: 1 )
by simsalabim on
Tuesday, 13th July 2010 @ 06:04:50 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
scary worldview. sounds a bit like being constipated.
::runs in front of a car:: |
|
|
Re: No Chance
(User Rating: 1 )
by RAJNANDY on
Tuesday, 13th July 2010 @ 08:50:46 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Friend , i loved the concept and your poem !
Best wishes , - Raj
*** Self promotion part of this comment removed. Self promotion is not allowed at YPDC *** Moderator_18 July 14, 2010 |
|
|
Re: No Chance
(User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 06:30:28 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| very visual and deep. |
|
|
Re: No Chance
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 15th July 2010 @ 01:05:50 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
i can sense the urgency and preciousness of life that your poem provokes.
its so true we only get once chance to aspire. well done...
take care
-K.Z. |
|
|
Re: No Chance
(User Rating: 1 )
by antikythera on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:19:47 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Interesting...good use of bold and italics |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
