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Raw Emotion
Contributed by
Bunit682
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Tuesday, 13th July 2010 @ 07:13:24 AM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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Some times I have the notion
To release this raw emotion
But it takes devotion
To mix that potion
Before you release it up on the world
So every man woman boy and girl
Can feel what I feel inside
And see what I see when I close my eyes
Just the acclaimation
Is the only motivaton
That I need to keep me going
My mind is a river that is forever flowing
I just stare at the tablet And they seem to write themselves
And then I turn the page, close the cover and put it back on the shelf
And there they wait untill
I feel
That it's time for them to be unleashed on socitey
And maybe allow me to collect some noteriety
Copyright ©
Bunit682
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2010-07-13 07:13:24]
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Re: Raw Emotion
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by Sushila on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 12:19:45 AM AEST
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Nicely written words of expression on raw emotion.
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