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Cold Morning
Contributed by
Feelin_Like_A_Sadfellow
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Wednesday, 16th April 2003 @ 08:25:00 PM in AEST
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Cold Morning
Walking outside, early this morning
Watching the clouds, escape my mouth
Looking down, at my hands
They are so red
My cheeks, have lost their coloring
All my feelings, traveling south
Just like my friends
Hope there is, something better ahead
Spring is here, but all I see is snow
I have said my sorries and made my dues
God damn I feel so low
What am I suppose to do
What is the point in saying sorry
When all you get is a door,
Slammed in your face
Where is the logic in apologizing
When all you get is a cold shoulder,
With a greater feeling of guilt
Soon the snow is going to fade
Soon the sun is going find its way,
Over here
That is why you say sorry
Because someday you might,
Be able to stay, inside
On an early morning,
Away from the cold feelings
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Re: Cold Morning
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 01:17:23 AM AEST
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you painted a lovely picture. This is sad but well written.Good luck too you.
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Re: Cold Morning
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 05:55:49 PM AEST
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| awww so sad, nicely written, when love takes a hike it is like a cold morning isn't it? hugs nessa |
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Re: Cold Morning
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by The_Phantom on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 10:35:33 PM AEST
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I agree with the wonderful ladyfawn, it is sad, and when love takes a hike, It's like a block of ice fall on your head.
The Phantom |
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Re: Cold Morning
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 24th April 2003 @ 01:23:16 PM AEST
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well written but oh so sad..but around the bend the sun may just shine again
Shari |
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