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Avry
Contributed by
truthful-lies
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Friday, 16th July 2010 @ 12:20:06 PM in AEST
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ChildrensPoetry
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Avry
wonderfly beautiful
talking, walking, laughing
as beautiful as the stars in the night sky.
perfect
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Re: Avry
(User Rating: 1 )
by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 04:49:59 AM AEST
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Re: Avry
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by antikythera on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:00:38 AM AEST
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| Too short...if you're going to write short poems you should adopt a more beatnik style (you're almost there with the first three sentences...) |
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