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Prisoner
Contributed by
LyssaM
on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 12:07:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am a prisoner of my self existence
Unable to find the strength to release myself
From the wrath of what I call Love
I am a prisoner of my self existence
Crossing the bridge of denial
And into the river of self pity
I am a prisoner of my self existence
Crying out for another chance to change reality
To what it once was
I am a prisoner
Not of my self existence
But of the power within the mind of the enemy
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Re: Prisoner
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 12:28:51 PM AEST
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| Good strong powerful write challenging the power of thinking and how much we play a part in limiting ourselves well written |
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Re: Prisoner
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by Breezy on
Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 12:57:00 PM AEST
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Excellently written. I relate to your words so well, especially
this day. Time encircles us and refills our desire to exist free
of anguish. Sometimes it feels like an endless revolution of
discord; a collision with emotion that we must cycle through.
Not always easy but writing helps. =)
Wonderful post! -- Achelois |
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Re: Prisoner
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 05:47:26 AM AEST
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very powerful stuff here indeed... everyone has the power to break free whatever they are constraint from.
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Prisoner
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by andrewjones12 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 07:45:01 AM AEST
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i have writtin similar, but more litteral "critisizing jugements or medeating sins" a very nice write.
-andrew |
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