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Longing
Contributed by
slay797
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Sunday, 18th July 2010 @ 11:49:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Longing loving lust. Could this be my dream come true? Wanting so much more.
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2010-07-18 23:49:16] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Longing
(User Rating: 1 ) by chrisdavid on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 12:38:52 AM AEST (User
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Too short for my liking. Would have liked you to expand on it a little more. |
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Re: Longing
(User Rating: 1 ) by andrewjones12 on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 08:03:39 AM AEST (User
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very nice, short or not your hyku is beautiful. |
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