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Worlds Shine
Contributed by
smeethers
on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 02:27:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As the sun falls into the mountains, I realise how beautiful life can be
As the pale sky emerges with a soft pink colour of candy floss,
I realise how different things can seem
When I look at the sparking stars soaring in the nights coat
I notice everything passes in time
And when I see the glitter in my best friends eyes everything is fine
Theres not much I dont see when I look into your eyes,
Your sweet serenity captures my heart and reaches inside my tattered soul
I find that life has taken and will take its toll
But my soul is fragile
So we cant waste our days
The nights are too short
Let us follow an enchanted palace where failure is not spoken of,
When we talk about pain itll be a figure of speech,
Our hearts desires will be heard and granted
But I see what I see
You do what you do
The sorrow will pass and the laughter shall begin
And in the end its together that undeniably make our worlds shine
You make my world shine
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Re: Worlds Shine
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 04:14:58 AM AEST
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Too many heartfelt lines to pick a favourite.
Filled with such sincerity and warmth.The way it flows reminds me of water trickling over river rocks on a gorgeous sunny day!
Beautiful!
Blessings
LW |
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Re: Worlds Shine
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by andrewjones12 on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 07:14:10 AM AEST
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| friends are not granted willfully, but substituted undoubtfuly. nice write. |
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Re: Worlds Shine
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by quadira on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 10:08:45 AM AEST
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| a lovely poem of true friendship. beautiful words from the heart. |
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Re: Worlds Shine
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by smeethers on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 02:50:04 AM AEST
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| awwh! thank you very much everyone. much appreciated :] |
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