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Criticizing judgments? or mediating sins?
Contributed by
andrewjones12
on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 07:37:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The black mantels mallet >descends in a gasp of tense air.
Slamming upon its bed, with greed for a pillow and remorse as its satisfactory spread, determines another fate.
Echoing justice
And far from soon dates.
WHAAP!
Now your life is hard forgiven.
Future labor requires regretful records.
Youre labeled, forever.
You have died a death
that has kept you alive.
Your past
Has your lifetime in its grasp.
-would you like fries with that?
Copyright ©
andrewjones12
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2010-07-19 07:37:28]
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Re: Criticizing judgments? or mediating sins?
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by cashfan1 on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 07:45:09 AM AEST
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| very well writen, i like this very much. |
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Re: Criticizing judgments? or mediating sins?
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by joe-joe on
Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 12:51:27 PM AEST
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| nice write, interesting subject matter... |
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