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Better As A Memory
Contributed by
Nineteen
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Monday, 19th July 2010 @ 09:47:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I wish I could just tell him how much I love him and I'm sorry
But I cry at night so don't worry
He's always on my mind
But I'm just wasting my time
He doesn't even want me to apologize
Even though that's all I wanna do tonight
And it all disappeared like 1,2,3
As he sits there with his new girl thinking everything isn't always better as a memory
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Re: Better As A Memory
(User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 12:26:15 AM AEST
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So sad.I can just picture you curled up with tears before you drift to sleep(((hugs)))
I wrote a piece a long time ago inspired by pain like yours.
Its called "Don't let the sun catch you crying" .
Take a look if you like...no need to comment,I just want to share it with you *smiles*
http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=25969
Your poem is written so simplistically,yet so very universal.So many of us have felt this pain.
Thank you for sharing and I do hope you will see your way through it all.Actually...I KNOW you will ;)
Blessings
LW |
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Re: Better As A Memory
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 07:23:09 AM AEST
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| once becoming a memory, moving on becomes possible |
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Re: Better As A Memory
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by kethley on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 06:58:07 AM AEST
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regrets are always at the end...
all we just need to do is to let it go so that we could move forward...
Love,
Kethley |
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