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A Dream created by you
Contributed by
mila
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Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 01:37:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The images you painted in my mind are so breath taking like a masterpiece that is priceless.
You have created a craving in me for wanting you so much as if I need to just hear your voice to ease me.
Yet, the excitement builds in me day by day to see you and be close to you by my sparkling thoughts.
Just the idea to be with you has become my dream that I cant wait for it to come true.
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Re: A Dream created by you
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 03:28:31 AM AEST
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Hello,
I do not very often,if at all,leave what they call "constructive criticism".I usually merely rave on how much I like the poem lol.
But when I read your words,beautiful heartfelt words...I realised that something is missing.
It's just the way in which your piece is presented.
Maybe set out differently?? Yet could only add to an already lovely write.
Very Nice
Blessings
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Re: A Dream created by you
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 10:00:49 AM AEST
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Nice write, very creative.
Blessings,
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