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Reasons Why...
Contributed by
Lionheart89
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Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 06:22:52 PM in AEST
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Reasons why
If you dont give it a chance, look what lies behind that outer shell
How could you possibly know what hes thinking and whats on his mind?
Some beautiful thoughts: Smart, Compassionate, Wise and more to find
Just take a new look every day and see that he has so much more to tell
With a heart of a lion: Loyal, Brave, Strong and in the right place
You should hear how it beats when youre around
If you put your ear on his chest and listen to its sound
You would know that is indeed good in so many ways
His wonderful soul: Kind, Honest and Sweet
Holding everything you might wish or need
Endlessly wishing and hoping while waiting within
For its illusive dream to become reality, to finally begin
Therefore I ask you, would I need a divine conspiracy?
To show you what is, and what could be
For you to just spend a little time with me
Copyright ©
Lionheart89
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2010-07-20 18:22:52]
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Re: Reasons Why...
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by voyage on
Tuesday, 20th July 2010 @ 07:03:51 PM AEST
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If you show yourself, and all the positive qualties you possess and shine with good attitude and personality, then one day stop being as "available" or distant, that makes a person think of you and perhaps just enough to have you bearound. After that who know what it may lead to, maybe even what you now desire. You have to want it thoug, really imagine yourself getting what you want and work for it, few right moves and it may yield a chance!
Good read, I enjoyed it. |
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Re: Reasons Why...
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 12:00:48 AM AEST
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**looks up at above comment and nods head** :)
I just really loved the way it flowed and was unfaltering in its rhythm.
I likey!!
Blessings
LW |
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Re: Reasons Why...
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by andrewjones12 on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 07:37:38 AM AEST
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how modest you seem, i enjoyed this very much. i have writtin similar, but more so envy of the other. its called "divine" you may find some of the same emotion behind it if you wouldnt mind reading it.
very nice write.
-andrew |
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Re: Reasons Why...
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by Insane_Outsider on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 08:41:32 PM AEST
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| Wonderful style of rhyming. it gets boring to hear an A. B. A. B. rhyming format all the time. But the funny thing is, your rhyming format is the same as that oldschool band. A. B. B. A. hahahahah. :) |
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