|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
ouch.
Contributed by
andrewjones12
on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 08:06:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
|
The feelings arent neutral.
Every word,
Concern,
Care,
Or embrace.
Was a fake brutal disgrace.
Complicated emotions and good feelings were a mask.
It was a good cover up..
That things were going to fast.
Hurt
Pain
Confusion
And boiling rage are the only feelings I pertain.
My head is all screwed up from this twisted game.
-Im losing.
Copyright ©
andrewjones12
... [
2010-07-21 08:06:12]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: ouch.
(User Rating: 1 )
by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 04:19:58 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| strong words strongly expressed, I like your writing, more please. |
|
|
Re: ouch.
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 11:00:18 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wonderful Andrew,
You're feeling again, and that's just the beginning. Now you have learn to control those feelings, and to that there is no end!
But, losing, No, Never, Not You!
You hang in there dear friend, keep progressing, no matter how painful, it will all come out in the end.
I love "feeling" poems, this was exceptional!
Warm love
consue |
|
|
Re: ouch.
(User Rating: 1 )
by SunshineySam on
Saturday, 28th August 2010 @ 07:16:19 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Beautiful flow. Sad, but keep moving forward. Chin up, wipe the dirt off, it'll be okay. :) |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
