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Sleeping on the Couch
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 01:57:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Slumbering solo,
deciding to stay angry,
damaging our love
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2010-07-21 13:57:32]
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Re: Sleeping on the Couch
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 05:47:10 PM AEST
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This is sooooo sad. Have had many of those days. For both of us...then, it eventually ended.  |
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Re: Sleeping on the Couch
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by Insane_Outsider on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 08:22:12 PM AEST
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Great haiku. I have a haiku of similar interest.
sometimes what you hate may be what you want most...
in this world of fate
i am brought here by my hate
to open loves gate.
I like the style of your haiku more though. |
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Re: Sleeping on the Couch
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 04:17:14 AM AEST
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| I really enjoy your writing and although rather sad I still find myself drawn to it. thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Sleeping on the Couch
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by andrewjones12 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 06:47:31 AM AEST
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such strong evading love. i feel for your scratching painted vase of your once glossy love.
i wonderful write.
-andrew |
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