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Beware
Contributed by
poetrygal9
on
Wednesday, 21st July 2010 @ 02:41:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It's in the air, it's on the ground It's in the trees, it's all around A kiss covered by the deep dark of night A brand new toy under Christmas lights A forbidden song sung by paramours A touch that they secretly adore A fight obscured by curtains in a room Unspeakable anger hidden by gloom A ghost, it is, silently stalks Clattering, ripping, tearing up hearts It clings to your throat, brings its fire in your eyes As it sits back contently, planning its demise Sometimes you will hear its scraggly voice It's as quiet as the wind's noise It's not rambuntious, bouyant, or zealous But when you hear it, it's sure to ask: "Jealous?"
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Re: Beware
(User Rating: 1 ) by andrewjones12 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 07:07:46 AM AEST (User
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this was excellent!!! i enjoyed your write very much so!
great work, i felt your words flowing through me.
-andrew |
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Re: Beware
(User Rating: 1 ) by kd7cnz on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 07:55:01 AM AEST (User
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Very well written. Thanks |
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