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Acknowledge Me
Contributed by
MMP1984
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Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 07:30:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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-Hours drifted into days
-Months swept over weeks
-Years turned into reality
Wondering...how could you forget apart of you...that is in me
-Don't you feel the tears of a puddle
-Hardache of a river running wild
-An empty ocean grasping for memories
...for a love I can't set free...from a mother who will not acknowledge me
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Re: Acknowledge Me
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by cashfan1 on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 06:53:54 AM AEST
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| such sadness, so well expressed and so well writen, this really means so much to you, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Acknowledge Me
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by andrewjones12 on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 08:13:30 AM AEST
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this is beautifuly sorrowful, thanks for sharing.
and very well writtin.
-andrew. |
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Re: Acknowledge Me
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 10:12:18 AM AEST
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| nice |
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