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Tranquility
Contributed by
cashfan1
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Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 05:33:00 AM in AEST
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Morning seems so far away
On horse back riding through the day
The sun is hot upon my back
I've lost myself down a one way track
To tranquility, sweet tranquility.
Morning is a friend of mine
In the soft dawn light she looks so fine
Laying there on the mountain side
I can feel the love in the tears she cried
For tranquility, sweet tranquility.
Morning makes me think of you
Your soft brown eyes and hair of dew
Standing there by the mountain stream
You've lost yourself in a splendid dream
Of tranquility, sweet tranquility.
Morning makes me love you more
Than I did yesterday and the day before
Hand in hand at the mountain's edge
We'll fly away on a solemn pledge
To tranquility, sweet tranquility.
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Re: Tranquility
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by northernlights on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 06:46:04 AM AEST
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| Soft warm and gentle lovely in its simplicity leaves u with a sigh well written |
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Re: Tranquility
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by andrewjones12 on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 07:21:13 AM AEST
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tranquility, sweet tranquility i felt as i read this.
very nice.
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Re: Tranquility
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by spud on
Friday, 23rd July 2010 @ 12:25:40 PM AEST
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Hi D,
A lovely piece that transports the reader on
a wave of ...... well ....... tranquility!
Tommy
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Re: Tranquility
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by omarzz on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 02:50:51 AM AEST
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| this is a very beautiful poem. well done |
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Re: Tranquility
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 09:07:39 AM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: Tranquility
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 24th July 2010 @ 11:01:44 PM AEST
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My fave topic to write about...Mother Earth and all her many gifts.
You have definately inspired my pen and so I will be writing tonight.
I ABSOLUTELY adore this piece,not just because of its subject but moreso because of the way you write of beauty and tranquility.Sooo relaxing to read.
Thank you!!
Blessings
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Re: Tranquility
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 12:45:49 PM AEST
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In the still, still, of the morning Dennis. When everyone is still! My thoughts begin to drift at will.
This is lovely dear Dennis, and so like you. Your Analogies amaze me. Leave me feeling your Tranquillity!
Warm love
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