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Drunk
Contributed by
antikythera
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Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 05:44:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I conduct myself in a windy manner because I am
drunk and enchanted in this field.
The oxygen around my head is rabid
and filled with orange light
like a equinoctial tiger to its flesh.
My heart moves violently
on this neon ship.
I promise as I were a rotting ghost
forced half-open in love
in front of the gray agony of the darkness
and decaying droplets of acidulous gold.
I reply, only fear and geology are the
leaves of beligerance.
I'd do it for the geology
and I'd do it for the fear of your response.
Copyright ©
antikythera
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2010-07-25 05:44:38]
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Re: Drunk
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 06:55:42 AM AEST
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I promise as I were a rotting ghost
forced half-open in love
Many layers to this piece, it demands a second and even third reading. I like the challenge you've set out here, well done.
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Re: Drunk
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by thebadguy9999 on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 11:29:40 AM AEST
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Re: Drunk
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 12:39:25 PM AEST
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| this is really a fascinating write, very deep and expressed with such subtle wording. very well done. |
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Re: Drunk
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by andrewjones12 on
Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 08:06:46 AM AEST
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what cashfan has said, i feel so.
well done.
-andrew. |
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