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The Demon
Contributed by
dogsruleruby
on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 10:28:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The darkness inside,
It's consuming me.
All the hate, pain, anger.
I try to fight it,
But this demon won't let go,
Pulling me farther from the light.
Now with the scars on my arm,
The holes in the wall,
And the blade in hand,
I know I'm no longer myself.
The blade runs down my chest,
Causing small cuts,
For more demons to enter.
The demon has full control now,
Pushing the blade down harder.
The light is slowly coming into vision,
So close yet so far.
But I know,
The demon
Will drag me down with him...
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2010-07-25 10:28:40]
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Re: The Demon
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by thebadguy9999 on
Sunday, 25th July 2010 @ 11:26:49 AM AEST
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| God Bless You. It was a interesting write. |
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Re: The Demon
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 26th July 2010 @ 08:45:16 AM AEST
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I can feel a sense of the tortured mind in this.
Nice write.
Steve |
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Re: The Demon
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by Daniellemarie on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 01:13:22 AM AEST
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I like this raw and honest piece because not many people are aware of the pain we feel everyday and every waking minute.
they dont see the true side of us the broken down and scared side thats fighting against the darkness. |
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Re: The Demon
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by xnickix7 on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 07:59:20 PM AEST
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| Wonderful piece, I really felt your release in that one. Great job.. |
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