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Life from the Intellect
Contributed by
asphara
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Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 01:59:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Little life,
Little thing, once a bud, centred,
Whole, Sways tenderly, still morning,
Wakeful,
Youthful fires stir, flick and twitch,
Split,
Twitch and splits open, inside out,
Unfurls,
Hurtles,
Innards now most outer, lurid
Lashings
Of body odour, gushing guts of
Lurid colour...
Little life, the baby sleepy,
Sleeping
Sweetly,
Rocking peaceful, lazy head, button
Nose,
Gently flailing like a rose, little kiss,
Slightest
Mite, little delicate snoozing life,
Blob in a box,
Twitching mass of cells,
Convulsive
Little blackness, unfurling splutter guts
From nothing,
A screaming little existential hell,
A little crystal splinter life,
Bright,
So blue,
So cold,
So spewing, swamping
Out of nothing,
Sleeping stickiness,
Creeping sickness, Gulf engulfed,
Engulf the gulf,
Dangling,
Crying, wants to be pretty,
Whoring,
Hanging, gagging, in this thing,
This crushing intellect,
This creeping life,
This creeping death!
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Re: Life from the Intellect
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 02:22:57 PM AEST
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Certainly a whirl of imaginery running through this piece.
Lots of emotive phrases which helped develop the idea.
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Re: Life from the Intellect
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by andrewjones12 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 07:08:59 AM AEST
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very well writtin, i loved your image.
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Re: Life from the Intellect
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by Sparkz16 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 09:24:15 AM AEST
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Wow, the imagery was wonderfull i can picture kinda like an alice in wonderland falling into the rabbit hole while reading this i loved it keep the pen flowing my friend
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