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Bad Day!!
Contributed by
manic
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Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 05:53:20 PM in AEST
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ever have one of those days,
where nothing seemed to go your way,
everything you touched just fell away,
those you love no longer stay,
wondering how this could be gods true way,
a cruel torturer hard at play,
you say " ***** it all " im not gonna stay,
in this lousy world one more day,
then you stop and think, you better stay,
theres people who need you in many ways,
children who are deep in your heart,
loved ones you don't want to depart,
so you suck it up and keep movin on,
then one day a conclusion is drawn,
the world will spin long after your gone,
so make your loved ones feel good,
hug them tight whenever you could,
you cant blame god for everything,
even when he acts like a demented king!!
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Re: Bad Day!!
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by Maygee on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 05:59:00 AM AEST
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| The poem is very well described and I personally enjoy the feel when I read it and the rhyming at each sentence's end. Well done =] |
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