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akai ito (Red String)
Contributed by
lavenderfeathers
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Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 07:40:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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They say that when two lovers are born
They come into this world binded by a red string
A delicate string that neither can see
and so fate allows their pain to unravel
as they walk this earth living their lives
Day after day
Shedding tears, laughing, and loving others along the way
All the while not knowing of each others existence
Walking side by side in a maze made up of sadness
He turns left ..
While she turns right
in a maze that seems never ending
Like fragile moths trying to reach a distant sun through flames
They too are drawn to cruel illusions painted by fate
Hearts beautifully entwined
Pulses overlapping harmoniously..yet..they cannot find their way home
Perhaps one day they will find the courage to change direction
with eyes closed theyll take brave steps forward until their hands meet
but until that day arrives they can only walk down the only path they know
He turns left
While she turns right
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Re: akai ito (Red String)
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by chrisdavid on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 12:48:01 AM AEST
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So true. Sometimes we need a change of direction in order to meet our destiny. Very good, enjoyed.
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: akai ito (Red String)
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 02:01:57 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write really enjoyed this, love the concept |
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