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Dragonfly Field
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 01:09:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Airy iridescent-winged fairies
flutter.
Loopy-loop flight in
mid-air,
Their flight carries away my
woes...
Delicate strength dizzily
diving,
circular patterns
entrance
my being.
Dragonflies have no
worries.
My imagination can only
make me a dragonfly
in the field.
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2010-07-29 01:09:19]
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Re: Dragonfly Field
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by cashfan1 on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 01:13:54 AM AEST
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Superb! I love this. highly descriptive and well expressed, a great start to my day.
thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Dragonfly Field
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 01:18:16 AM AEST
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Thankfully it's only your imagination (which is very vivid by the way) because if you were to really transform into a dragon fly, then we'd be missing your wonderful poetry.
I enjoyed this a lot.
Thank you,
Tim
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Re: Dragonfly Field
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by elle on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 01:44:08 AM AEST
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Hi Heidi,
Greetings from the Butterfly Field. From one colourful dreamer to another. . . Nicely done. Great imagery & a wonderfully descriptive touch.
elle :) |
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Re: Dragonfly Field
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by andrewjones12 on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 08:21:01 AM AEST
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well done! i love your use of words, and your stlye is awsome. its funny too! yesterday i found my self admiring a dragon fly laying on a legde coming out of a wall, and then i too had a deam of it last night. but in the dream, it was my pet. and it bit me! it was wierd....anyway, thanks for sharing this!
blessings,
-andrew. |
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Re: Dragonfly Field
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by PreciousKitten on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 10:36:27 AM AEST
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| i love this poem, it's very powerful yet simple. keep writing. |
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