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MAY CAUSE THINKING!
Contributed by
andrewjones12
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Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 08:10:13 AM in AEST
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Have it be known its hard to find Im.
Because what am I?
Is the reason I am?
Where miracles are, are in doubt.
Forget when and why it wonders about.
Running smoothly along longing.
Representing hard times,
traveling achievement is what determines how you live.
So miracles are death, and love is life.
Thievery of both creates mortals.
Fighting the paroles fight.
-typically typical to the normal doubt that runs the wondering miracles about.
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Re: MAY CAUSE THINKING!
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 12:42:44 PM AEST
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A very depth provoking, and thoughful poem directly from "I'm" the mortal that wrote it all down.
Mysteriously with miracles being the soul substance of we human critters left alive.
Then the normal doubt that we all experience everyday of our lives that runs we as miracles all about!
Way out, Andrew, Way out.......but still reachable, with a mind like yours you should be very teachable!!!
ENCORE, A BIT SLOWER PLEASE ENCORE FOR SURE!
Warm love,
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