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Sticks & Stones
Contributed by
JakerBaker88
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Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 08:45:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Good intentions count little,
Especially the humorous kind
For in my witty banter,
You mistook my rhyme;
You cut me down to size,
Ridiculed our friendship---
Broke the smile that was mine
And walked away triumphant,
While I remained silent----
Left far behind.
Copyright ©
JakerBaker88
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2010-07-29 20:45:44]
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Re: Sticks & Stones
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by Sushila on
Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 08:30:20 AM AEST
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| Misconceptions and misinterpretations can hurt when in actual truth no one was meant to be. You have captured the misery of being misunderstood very well in this poem. Well wirtten. |
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Re: Sticks & Stones
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by DrcGaimer on
Friday, 30th July 2010 @ 12:19:07 PM AEST
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| Indeed, nice piece. Loved the line "broke the smile that was mine". |
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Re: Sticks & Stones
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 03:56:08 AM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: Sticks & Stones
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 31st July 2010 @ 04:44:46 PM AEST
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very sad and heartfelt, yet i loved how u wrote this...
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Sticks & Stones
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by yvonxsmeets on
Sunday, 1st August 2010 @ 01:13:36 PM AEST
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Nice piece of writing
well done |
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Re: Sticks & Stones
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by Pat346 on
Friday, 6th August 2010 @ 09:47:11 AM AEST
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| Short and to the point. Love it. |
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